Revised chapter for TRM

This is what happens when you don’t have a beta reading your work before you publish.  Some of my ff.net readers interpreted things in the last chapter in ways I had not intended, so I went back and tweaked the chapter to make Eric’s intentions and motivations more clear.  I didn’t want to leave people thinking he was a total douche, just a confused guy with active hormones!

The Real Me, Chapter 4: Sparks Fly REVISED!

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