July 4th is my birthday and I hope you won’t mind if I consider the next chapter of He’s Not There my present for you today. I appreciate everyone who takes the time to read my work, especially when you give me feedback.
Of course, I may be saying that because I’m totally worried that this chapter totally sucks! Lesson I learned from this: battle scenes with lots of people in lots of different places doing lots of different things are very hard to think through, choreograph and write! But I know certain of you will tell me kindly and constructively if there is something I can do to make this ballroom blitz of a fight read better. Right? ;-D
Happy 4th of July, all.