New chapter of He’s Not There

I was going to write considerably further into the events of the story in this chapter, but it was already getting kind of long and unwieldy, so I split the chapter up.  Hopefully y’all don’t find it too corny! (Sorry, too much Sookie in my head lately.  We don’t actually say “y’all” on the East Coast.) It is the beginning of my first ever action scene and I’m a bit insecure about treading into this new territory.  More to come on the holiday weekend, I suspect!

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Chapter 11 of He’s Not There: Sic Semper Tyrannis

 

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